Loup-garou
Upon the chiselled stones
I see my blood
And broken bones
The faintest call escapes my lips
As claws outstretched
Rend all that rips
Blazing eyes and rancid breath
Sharp stained fangs
Most grizzly death
For fearsome beast was my last sight
A fool who wandered
The moonlight night.
I dunno, I feel like there should be more to it ... it just seems a little bare...
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yeah it needs more but I like especially the last paragraph. Does he see human prey?
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