I look to the sky
and see my new master
I ask her why
as my blood moves faster
The moon shines bright
but she doesn't reply
And despite the night
i try to deny
The evil inside
but i don't have control
She's raising the tide
as she's taking my soul
My scream echoes loud
as i fall to the ground
I have been endowed
with the curse of the hound
I wake up at dawn
and i have been fed
The beast is gone
but my heart is dead.
i'm not sure if i should keep the last stanza, i really like it but i don't know.
this was my first poem about werewolves but i liked it a lot, tell me what you think.
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come now you must have something to say about it?
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=] I like it. I must say it is simply written, but very entertaining, I think.
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Good, very much like what being a new werewolf would feel like - or being a werewolf not in control of yourself, like a curse.
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